Help with supplement essay! (Please help, I'm really struggling!)

<p>If anyone would be willing to read my Bowdoin supplement essay, I would be incredibly grateful, as I'm really struggling with it and I'm not getting much help from anyone in terms of editing/revising.
I'd be more than happy to exchange essays as well if anyone has something they need help on too (:
Thanks so much for any responses!!</p>

<p>Sure! I’ll read it if you can read my supplement for my ED college (deadline got extended for 1.5 weeks due to the east coast storm).</p>

<p>I’ll take a look . . . PM the essay, the prompt, and what kind of feedback you’re looking for.</p>

<p>Thank you so much everyone (: I sent you the essay</p>

<p>FateGoneAwry, pm me your essay back :D</p>

<p>Would anyone else be willing to help? :)</p>

<p>Hey Deblerg,
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*I am fairly new to the site so CC hasn’t allowed me to PM yet, email me if you want to discuss in more detail!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM me.</p>

<p>Thank you so much everyone! (:</p>