Help with Supplement?

Colleges & Universities University of Chicago
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<p>For my essay, I’m writing about overgrowing old philosophies and feelings and gaining new ones. I was going to write about my fear of nuclear power, and how I’ve overcome the feeling and an analysis on why I felt that way and how I changed. </p>

<p>Any criticisms?</p>

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<p>It sounds fine to me. If you insist on criticism, I would say that it sounds a bit abstract and impersonal.</p>

<p>Just don’t forget to show yourself.</p>