On top of those, i wanted to mention their inter-professional education, the alumna that I shadowed, their supportive community.
I pulled a lot of information. I’m just trying to write a different essay than I did. I might cannibalize a segment on diversity I already wrote to satisfy diversity inclusion and connection. I will have to trim it down.
I’m going to stay way from pance rate. I don’t feel it would be constructive. They know their pance rates.
I also don’t want to say “as a soldier/veteran i find x value appealing”.
A lot of this is spitting back their websites in a creative way and linking it to myself. The challenge is doing it in 1250 characters.