The essay topic im responding to is “Please explain why you need to be a part of NCSSM, and specifically how NCSSM can assist you in achieving your future goals.” I thought I had a good essay but my dad recently reviewed it and said I was being too negative about my current school. Also, I am worried I was too vague. I wrote about how my current schedule does not have many opportunities to get more advanced classes and how my school falls kinda flat on the academic side. I didn’t list any specific classes though. The character limits is super short too, 2000 characters, so I don’t know if I have room to add anything. Any advice? (I don’t want to post my essay here because I’m worried it would be flagged as plagiarism)
Thanks!
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