Hi Im from Vietnam. Would somebody help critique my Common App essay?

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Hello I am from Vietnam. Im preparing for my toefl, sat and essay at the same time. I really don’t know who I can ask to read my CA essay in my area because my teachers don’t have much experience assessing CA essays and my friends are quit competitive so they rarely share CA with each others and don’t really agree to have a review over my CA. I know it is quit early to write a ps now (isn’t it??) but I have so many other things to take care such as toefl or sat 2.

Please help me to have a review I would be very grateful.
Thank you for reading my post :slight_smile:

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hey im from vn too. im pleased to help if you still need :slight_smile:

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I don’t mind helping you. Just inbox me the essay

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@mpthuytien Don’t ask random online people who also apply to college like you to read your essay. They may steal your ideas to write their own essays and the colleges may think you copy their ideas. It’s better to go to the Parent forum to ask.