Hi, looking for an essay critique

<p>The title is: Why CEOs like Meg Whitman Are Unqualified to be Governor</p>

<p>Any help would be aprpeciated!</p>

<p>Have you tried essayforums.com?</p>

<p>I did look over there, but the traffic in the coursework essays sub forum seemed to be pretty light, and a lot of the posts and comments were amateurish. In fact, there seemed to be very little discussion about critique and mostly people asking general questions about writing essays.</p>

<p>On this forum though, there are several threads where people have asked for critiques and gotten positive responses. So I figured this would be a good place to ask.</p>

<p>Just an fyi, the essay is not particularly long, just 650 words.</p>