Hi there, I need help with proofreading my essay plz. thanks! :)

College Essays
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<p>Sorry, didn’t know you can’t delete it. I’m kind of new here.</p>

<p>Can somebody help me proofread it ? I guess I’ll PM it</p>

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<p>Ok, obviously this doesn’t work.
Here’s the link on google doc you can actually make suggestions or changes. Otherwise I would really appreciate any feedback here.</p>

<p><a href=“https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9ku6bU0pQU2cGgtT1lQRHlFaGs/edit[/url]”>https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9ku6bU0pQU2cGgtT1lQRHlFaGs/edit&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;