Hmm..anyone willing to revise my essay before I submit it for college admissions?

College Essays
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<p>Prompt: Describe your professional goals and how your chosen major relates to these goals. Is there a professional in your field of choice who might serve as your role model?</p>

<p>Essay is for Woodbury University</p>

<p>600 words max</p>

<p>Please give me solid critiques to improve it! </p>

<p>Let me know and I will PM my essay to you! </p>

<p>Thanks in advance! ;)</p>

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<p>you can email me your essay and i’ll reply in a few days</p>

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<p>ill take a look if u still want</p>