hmm it appears that both of my short essays focus on the same personality

<p>One talks about wanting to try new things... and the other one talks about actually trying new things.</p>

<p>Would these complement each other, or are just redundant in their purposes</p>

<p>I haven't read them, so I don't have enough information to give you a specific answer.</p>

<p>My strategy was to expose them to as many important aspects of my life as possible while still being able to elaborate on each of them in sufficient detail. If your two essays don't really show different sides of you, it might be advisable to rewrite one.</p>

<p>k ya i modified the second one so that it focuses now on determination and patience.</p>

<p>k nvm, i changed the other one all together.</p>