<p>I asked my English teacher to proofread my essay for GT and she suggested me to talk more about a particular activity or achievement (my essay is about how much I love technology).</p>
<p>She also told me to have a “hook” at the beginning, something like a quote, that can be used to introduce a story about something I did or achieved.</p>
<p>I thought about it and since GT has a pretty big anime club, and I really like anime, I decided to put a quote from an anime to start my essay. Is this bad idea? </p>
<p>btw the quote I want to use is from a boxing anime about never giving up.</p>