how acne changed me

<p>writing about how i took accutane - severe drug for acne, showing how acne changed me socially, athletically, academically. it defines who i am, i fought thru the acne and worked my way out of it...show how i actually worked for everything i have accomplished today. most things that I want I can get by working hard, and without having to fight thru acne, which gave me a huge amount of mental strenght, i would not have this quality today.</p>

<p>is this good?
i dont want to focus on acne...i want to focus on my work ethic and desire to achieve something i want
all of my teachers write about how i am the hardest working student, and i have worked my way up from a lowly freshman to a well respected senior</p>