<p>Just on a side note, hasn’t accutane recently been exposed as causing severe side effects. Don’t quote me on this but I am pretty sure that for some people use of accutane can be severely dangerous.</p>
<p>yes it actually is and there has been some commericals about it saying contact a lawyer if u have taken accutane. i mention this in my essay to add to my fear of taking the medicine, and it builds suspense for the reader</p>
<p>My son said filling his script for accutane was more difficult than purchasing a gun.</p>
<p>i can say thats probably true</p>
<p>How were my edits? Did they help? Sry for being so rough btw haha .</p>
<p>haha no they were actually helpful. since you changed so much im still deciding to see which one i want to keep (between the original and yours) because i want to preserve my voice</p>
<p>Yup, that’s why I said to improvise on the similes xD</p>
<p>the overall story flows a lot better after your edits. thanks for that. you also made it about 530 words which is a lot more acceptable than what i had before.<br>
can anyone read this new version and tell me what they think of it?</p>
<p>ill def read it. i have acne too! my derm strongly advised that i use accutane but im skeptical</p>
<p>i used accutane!!! Works like magic doesn’t it?</p>
<p>yeah with the worst symptoms ever though</p>
<p>i actually bought a handgun in western virginia once with no id or background check</p>
<p>getting accutane filled was like a six-step process</p>
<p>anyway relevant to the topic i think you could pull it off</p>
<p>can anybody tell me how close they think my final draft is to being finalized?(or ready to submit). im pretty sure its very close and only the last paragraph needs work</p>
<p>i’d be happy to read your essay too!
and i’m sure admissions would definitely be interested in the essay as well since it’s on a unique topic.
hahahahaha
acne…</p>
<p>I’d be honored to read it again for you haha.</p>
<p>haha i dont know if your serious or not…ill sent my final draft to you if u want. not much will prob have changed lol. but can u, or any1 else check my EC essay? (150 words)</p>
<p>Ill read it too, essay me :)</p>
<p>im not even using this anymore. but thanks everyone for the help</p>
<p>ok everyone. i have a whole new essay. its about going from thinking i was good at a sport, and making the worst sports team at my school, to being the varsity captain my senior year. i just wrote it. who wants to read?</p>
<p>I will check it out!</p>