How can I get myself off of this waitlist as quickly as possible? - Barnard

In my LOCI, would it be safe to say that I would 100% commit if admitted? I would be telling the truth under the condition that I am receiving some financial aid. Or, should I rephrase it by saying that I would 100% commit if admitted given the financial aid works out for my family?

I hope to get this LOCI out as soon as possible because it may show my immediate dedication and I want to reaffirm that they are my first choice.