How do I explain my poor academic performance during some of my past semesters to people on a college admissions committee?

Hello, I’m an undergraduate student who’s pursuing an AA at a community college.

At some point, probably after I complete my AA, I plan to transfer to a four-year college.

One way to accomplish that would be to use my state’s transfer agreement to get guaranteed admission to one of the state colleges.

That would work, but I don’t want to do that. I dislike things about the state I currently live in, including changes that are being made to the college system, and I want to attend a college in a different state with a good program for my desired major.

This, of course, means I probably have to apply to transfer to (sometimes selective) colleges.

I have a few things working in my favor for my future applications. My recent grades have been good. I’ve engaged in extracurricular activities that are relevant to my major. Finally, for whatever it’s worth, I genuinely believe in my own capabilities, am passionate about my goals, and love my freedom and the world, in all its wondrous complexity.

But, and of course there’s a but, I have a lot of things that may work against me, notably my poor academic performance during previous semesters. I have a bunch of withdrawals and several failing grades on my transcript.

To explain why this is the case, I feel like I need to give some context. I have an unconventional educational background.

When I was relatively young, my parents took me out of school because they thought the elementary school my younger sister and I attended (rightfully) reported them to CPS for sexual abuse.

I spent the remainder of my youth being “homeschooled” and, for the most part, only interacting with my parents and sister.

I put that in quotations because my parents didn’t provide me a curriculum and didn’t teach me much of anything. That wasn’t the point.

I more or less taught myself everything on the cell phone I got access to as a younger adolescent. Mostly by reading, but also via YouTube videos and lectures and free online courses

I had no coursework, no teachers, no grades, no structure whatsoever.

When I was an older adolescent, my mother created a homeschool transcript that’s full of made-up information. They contain passing grades for classes I never took.

I didn’t want her to do that. She did it without my knowledge or consent. I think she did it to legally cover herself.

Despite my discomfort with the false information on them, I later used those transcripts to enroll in a community college. I wanted a formal education, and that seemed like the best path forward.

I wasn’t the most prepared student, but I taught myself enough to comprehend the material and easily do the coursework with a bit of guidance.

Nevertheless, I did poorly at first. I had a hard time adjusting to the outside world and had to deal with a litany of stressors - family violence, family suicide scares, sexual violence, inadequate nutrition and healthcare, etc.

During that period, there were many times I wanted to seek out support.

However, I always decided against it. I (rightfully) thought that if I told people in relevant social positions, like college faculty and psychotherapists, about some of the things that bothered me, they’d be required by law to report my parents to my state’s child welfare agency because my sister was under 18 at the time.

I didn’t want that to happen because I thought my parents would flee the state with my sister and me, destabilizing our lives and plans in the process. My parents had previously done that 2 times.

Over time, I learned to adjust to and navigate the world, my family situation improved, and my sister turned 18. That has coincided with better grades.

Unfortunately, as previously mentioned, I was left with bad semesters on my transcript.

How do I explain this to people? I want to be given a chance. I also don’t enjoy focusing on the gloomy bits

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Sorry this has been your story – it is wonderful that you have found the strength to move forward in such a positive direction.

With multiple poor semesters, I think the chance of admission to a competitive private college would be a real reach. It is fine to put in some applications but if your best option turns out to be an in-state public college then jump on the opportunity to get a four year degree. You can move out of state once you get your degree.

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Nothing wrong with a degree in your state. You can move after. Life is long.

Fill out other apps. Tell your story. But have your worst case, assured scenario.

How do you tell it - honestly.

Also there are many non competitive colleges out there outside your state. But one good thing about your in state school - your credits will likely all transfer. It’s unlikely to be the case at schools without an articulation agreement. So if time and money matter, that’s another thing.

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You don’t mention budget or how willing your parents are to fund you, but instate is also likely to be the cheapest option - transfers generally don’t get the best funding and a wobbly academic record also unfortunately means decent merit is unlikely. I would apply to both instate and out of state but be realistic that instate is probably the most likely outcome. There is a part of the application where you can explain extenuating circumstances/hardships but I’d suggest getting advice (possibly here) on how best to indicate some of the issues.

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I know it stinks to hear this, but for multiple reasons, you will likely have to go to school in your current state. I was in your shoes many years ago. I had to go to a state university which was far from my first choice. I graduated, got out and haven’t lived in that state in over 30 years. Make the most of it for the time being and know that you will be out very soon.

Still, I hope you take a shot at some private universities with deep pockets that could give you a full ride. Really put some time into your essays and avoid AI. You have an amazing story that will resonate with people. I hope you prove us all wrong.

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The best essays are the ones where you don’t “explain” anything. You set up a background, describe the adversity and how you were able to not only survive but become better because of it. You drop enough detail, but allow the reader to “infer” the rest. How readers pick up elements from your story and are able to connect to their own past experience is the “art” of essay writing. Turning negatives in your life into positive learning/grow lesson is also very difficult to master, but key being you can’t change your past, but how are you changing your future?

I don’t necessarily want to go to a private college. I want to go to a college in another state. I don’t like the state I live in. It’s not friendly enough for LGBTQ+ people.

Again, if your affordable acceptance js to stay in-state for two more years to get your degree then do it. You can move after college.

I expect you will find most college campuses have a number of open-minded students and supportive organizarions. You should be able to find “your people”.

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It’s not really about the students. It’s about state laws and college curriculums.

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Is budget an issue?

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My last post…even if not ideal, I recommend you get your 4 year degree. Apply out of state and see what happens. I fear your academic history may limit options but give it a try. If you have to stay in-state in the short term to get an affordable four year degree, I’d recommend doing that and then moving elsewhere.

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That depends if I am OK with being financially dependent on my grandmother.

I’d rather not be, but I’d rather be dependent on her than live in this state.

Nothing wrong with a degree in your state

No, but I’m dissatisfied with things that are being done to humanities courses. I think the curriculums are being made worse and some professors are being scared off.

It isn’t just me who believes that. For instance, the president of the community college I attend agrees with me.

Mind you, I don’t want to major in the humanities. However, I have academic interests in some humanities fields and would like to attend a college where my desire to formally learn about those fields can be adequately fulfilled.

I also dislike some of the new laws in my state and would much rather live somewhere else.

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  1. Budget first and foremost. You can meet your goals even in a red state.
  2. course transferability

Many states have easy schools to get into - but can you afford them and are you ok losing credits NJ, MA, NY, PA, MN, Wisconsin, Illinois all have non selective colleges etc.

Build a proper list but you will need $$.

Really put some time into your essays and avoid AI.

I will, and I’d never use an LLM to generate an essay for me.

I hope you prove us all wrong.

I’ll certainly try to prove those who doubt my capabilities wrong. I’ll always try. I don’t care how many years it takes and how many of the world’s horrors I must bear witness to.

I don’t have any room for bitterness, but I earnestly believe that in a different world with different circumstances, “I” would be very “successful” according to the institutional standards people pay attention to (for better or worse).

While this doesn’t say much, when I was still in grade school, I got what were probably the best grades and test scores in the entire school. I was on a good trajectory.

Then life took a turn and I had to teach myself everything with basically nothing. So it goes, I suppose.

I wish I could get a chance at a desirable college.

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Have you read “Educated” by Tara Westover?

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I started readibf it a while ago but haven’t finished it. I liked it, I just got distracted and then more or less forgot about it

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I think it could be inspirational for you. She got a PhD from one of the best universities in the world, but she also got there via what I expect is the kind of undergrad institution you’re trying to avoid. (No shade on that particular college, just a comment on the state it’s in and the factors that you’ve listed as important re state laws).

In the meantime, have a talk to your grandmother to see how much she is willing and able to contribute to your education. From all that you’ve said, essentially it sounds like you’d be happier with a “lesser known” school as long as it’s in a blue or purple state? If that’s the case there may be quite a lot of options, that people here can help with figuring out as well, if you do decide to go that route.

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From all that you’ve said, essentially it sounds like you’d be happier with a “lesser known” school as long as it’s in a blue or purple state?

I want to go to a college with a good program for my desired major, ideally one that provides me substantive financial support. I also want the college to have interesting humanities classes and extracurriculars activities.

By “extracurricular activities,” I mean things like clubs and internship opportunities that are relevant to my desired major. I don’t mean things like partying, drugs/alcohol, and Greek life. I have no interest in any of that.

Additionally, I would greatly prefer for my sister to be able to attend the same college, or at the very least live with me. I also would prefer to have no roommates, or at the very least be put in gender neutral housing and have a lot of agency over who I live with.

I also want to attend college in a state that isn’t governed by people who are outright hostile to transgender people and who pass anti-trans laws.

I only care about prestige in so far as it enables me to change my life and the world in desired ways.

I get the impression some people want prestige for the sake of prestige. Some people seem to want to go to X university because it’s ranked highly on some questionable list that ignores a ton of context. I have a hard time understanding that mindset. I don’t care about what’s considered prestigious in this world. People who do care unpaid work, trans women who do sex work, people who decommission ships, etc. deserve material resources and just as much respect and dignity as family physicians and well-cited physicists.

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So this is likely to be your stumbling block. There is often less aid for transfers in general, and almost always less aid or sometimes no aid for out of state students. You may need to keep your eyes on your longer-term goal and compromise in the short term.

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