<p>I intend to work towards a Masters Degree in XXXXX Engineering through the distance program. I have selected XXXX University for its outstanding faculty and curriculum aligned to my career goals. XXXXX Program will allow me to pursue a career where I can be creatively involved in problem-solving, generation of ideas and management through the product development lifecycle. As a first generation college student and a full-time working professional, a masters degree will give me the up-to-date tools and knowledge to be competitive and competent. Perhaps I could guide a rogue technology start-up company to an undisputed colossus of mainstream Asia and America, and develop myself to become the best and most reliable product within the organization. </p>
<p>I’m looking for a strong ending. This is for a Master’s in Engineering.</p>
<p>Please let me know how I could form it better. (And is the last sentence too speculative?)</p>
<p>I intend to work towards a Master’s Degree in XXXXX Engineering through the distance (education/learning) program. The outstanding faculty and curriculum at XXXX University are directly aligned with the achievement of my career goals. XXXXX Program will allow me to pursue a career where I can be creatively involved in problem-solving, generation of ideas, and management through the product development lifecycle. As a first generation college student and a full-time working professional, a master’s degree will provide me the cutting edge skills and knowledge to be competitive and competent. A graduate education at XXX University would provide me with the tools necessary to guide a rogue technology start-up company to an (the?) undisputed colossus of mainstream Asia and America, and develop into the leading and most reliable product within the organization.</p>