<p>Hey guys.
I’ve just finished writing my 1st draft of personal essay.
I feel like I put too much commentary in my essay and it kinda sounds persuasive too…
What’s your opinion on commentary part on the personal essay?
thanks! :)</p>
<p>I think that you should not overdue it, but just enough so that it can make the essay “real” or come to life. There is really no amount, or cut-off, it’s whatever works for your particular essay. Good Luck.</p>
<p>commentary makes ur story come alive.</p>