How much will these grammatical mistakes in BU's essay affect me?

Chance Me / Match Me
1

<p>“There is nothing better in life then seeing that smile on someone’s face when they are first told that their parent, their spouse, or their sibling is going to be alright.”</p>

<p>and using “the less-fortunate” instead the “the less fortunate.”</p>

<p>I know I may be acting crazy but will this hurt me greatly even though it is an otherwise good essay. BU is probably a low match for my, by the way.</p>

2

<p>1) then—>than
2) they—>he/she
3) their—>his/her</p>

<p>I don’t think the “fortunate thing” matters at all.</p>

<p>But that sentence is just EH! I don’t know, as long as the rest of it was good and your Short Statement was great.</p>

3

<p>oh this was my older version. i did change then to than but I left the rest.</p>

4

<p>No it will not hurt you much (if at all), and I’ve seen your stats, I think you should get in to BU.</p>