How to refer to Yale in Why Yale essay?! "it"? "she"?

College Essays
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<p>HELP GUYS! this is my last essay before going i try to cut down the words for everything. How do i refer to Yale? as in, “Yale attracts me because it offers a wide range of etcetc”? or “she”? or even addressing them directly, “you”?</p>

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<p>I’d try to avoid pronouns altogether, unless you seriously need to cut down the length.</p>

<p>Maybe “the wide range of (whatever) available at Yale is attractive to me.”</p>

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<p>it</p>

<p>Good luck with your essay.</p>

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<p>PM it to me and maybe I can help you out. Keep in mind that I am an 08er considering yale, but probably penn (I dont think I have a chance at yale and penn is still a huge reach). But if I help you on cutting down on words, could you please read mine? thanks.</p>