<p>PM if you would like to read it, I need fresh eyes. Also I have two versions one that is 501 words and another that is 586…86 words wouldn’t exceed the limit too much would it?</p>
<p>PM and let me know which you like better I’ll send the 500 first and then the other to see if the added details make that much of a diff…so PM me…soon</p>
<p>this one talks about two competitions I was involved in</p>