i am literally stuck. My essay is like 800 words and i have no idea about how to make it personal. It literally sucks. I am about to give up. i know thats not enough info but is there any general advice?
like my essay sounds like a commentary none of my real feelings are in it.
Which prompt did you answer? And can you give me a one sentence summary?
I answered the prompt that talks about a dilemma you would like to fix. I talked about gender roles in my extended family in India and how it changed and affected me. @bjkmom
This thread has general advice:
http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1817521-how-to-write-a-great-college-essay.html#latest