I believe my essay is really good, any critiques?

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone volunteer to read over my essay and give me his/her opinions? It’s not that long.</p>

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<p>If it is in MS word and you can email it to me I’d be happy to. I prefer it that way so I can use the track changes function to write comments. A lot easier for me.</p>

<p>PM me if you would like me to critique.</p>

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<p>Me!
I believe it is good too if you put effort into it</p>

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<p>Hey I would love to read your essay! PM me!</p>

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<p>yeah man.
PM me.</p>

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<p>^I’ll read it. PM it to me!</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>Ok 10characters</p>

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<p>looks like you have a lot of volunteers but if ill look at it if you need an eighth opinion lol.</p>

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<p>I volunteer! :smiley: PM it over if you still want an extra opinion!</p>

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<p>I WILL READ YOUR ESSAY AND MAKE IT BETTER AT NO COST TO YOURSELF.</p>

<p>PM it to me if you wish.</p>

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<p>pm me i’ll read it</p>