I cut down my essay, does it still flow?

Applying to College
1

<p>I cut my essay down from about 750 words down to about 590. I’m worried if it still flows. Post here if you could help me out by reading it and I’ll PM it to you (feel free to give comments besides flow). Gracias in advance.</p>

2

<p>Hello. I will read.</p>

3

<p>i will read too</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

5

<p>I’ll read. Could you send me both versions?</p>

6

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

7

<p>I’ll read it too.</p>

8

<p>I will read.</p>

9

<p>I’ll read as well.</p>

10

<p>If you still want someone to read, PM me.</p>