I love you Gtown, will you love me?

<p>I would love to go to SFS
California
GPA 4.68, UW 3.92 (I got one B in honors freshman math the heart break )
I don’t think you need to see my freshman/shoph classes they were solid I promise o but i took ap euro in 10th grade rest all honors
ACT: 31 (weakest part of my application) SAT II: 730 US History more to come
All A’s…
Junior Year:
AP Lang Comp
AP Envi Sci
AP US
Spanish 4
Pre-calc/Trig
Art History at community college
Model United Nations ( at my school its a class) </p>

<p>Senior Year:
AP Lit
AP Gov
AP Econ (micro and macro)
AP Comp Gov/ AP HUman Geography
AP Calc AB (I have so much respect for crazy BCers)
Physics Honors
Model United Nations
Mock Trial (also a class) </p>

<p>Here is my EC resume
Acedemics

  1. Will graduate with honors from the Palos Verdes International
    Department, a special program and curriculum designed for
    internationally focused students
  2. National recipient of the Fredrick Douglass and Susan B. Anthony
    Award in Humanities and Social Sciences, for a dedication to social
    justice
  3. The South Bay’s Delegate to the Hugh O’Brian Youth Leadership
    Conference
  4. AP Scholar with Honor: European History: 5, American History: 5,
    English Language and Composition: 5, Environmental Science: 5
  5. Secretary of National Honor Society
  6. Athletic Scholar
  7. Principal’s Honor Roll and member of California Scholarship
    Federation</p>

<p>International, Political and Cultural Extracurricular Activities.

  1. Volunteer for California Peace Action, which promotes an
    alternative, diplomacy-based foreign policy through grass roots efforts
    (3 years over 110 hours)
  2. Volunteer/backpacker in the Fijian Highlands, working to promote
    infrastructure development, focused especially in sanitation (1 month)
  3. Volunteer for Senator Obama’s Campaign, attended Camp Obama and
    currently works extensively in youth outreach
  4. Girl Scout Gold and Silver Award Recipient- developed a cultural
    education curriculum and taught over 250 children over a span of two
    months
    a. Girl Scout Leadership Award Recipient
  5. Model United Nations’ Secretary General, former Freshman trainer,
    organizes 8 conferences a year including Berkeley, Georgetown, and
    UCLA, has won ten awards including three “Gavels”-Best Delegate
  6. Mock Trail-Pre-Trial Lawyer (1 year)
  7. JHU’s Center for Talented Youth- classes in The United Nations, Law
    and Politics, Geopolitics, and The History of Arab Conflict and the
    Effect of Islam
  8. Independent study at local Mosque (1 Semester)
  9. Language intensive exchange in Spain (1 month)
  10. Volunteer translator for Los Angeles Orthopedic Hospital (4 years
    over 130 hours)
  11. Spanish Honor Society
    Athletics and Interests
  12. Active member of St. Peter’s By the Sea Church, part of the Student
    Appointed Leadership Team, sings in the choir, dances for the lyrical
    group, teaches Sunday School and goes on annual mission trips to Mexico
    to build homes
  13. Las Niñas Service Guild, has contributed over 400 hours over 4 years
    to the community through various projects, including recent work with
    the local women’s shelter, class representative and hospitality chair
    on the governing board
  14. Varsity Lacrosse for four years (Team Spirit Award), two years
    junior varsity golf, and 8 years of dedicated yoga practice
  15. Link Crew Team Leader (2 years)
  16. Four year member of Red Tide, PV’s beloved basketball student
    cheering section</p>

<p>It looks like a realistic reach, meaning you have a better chance than most.</p>

<p>I think you could organize your application better and choose which activities are most important to you and then highlight those. It’s confusing when so many things are crammed together…</p>

<p>yeah of course just for cc’s purpose squished seemed a better than like a full page post, i can fix it if its that terrible</p>