I need a CRITICAL essay reader

<p>I’m a little nervous about giving my essay to a stranger…
so if you have an official e-mail account?</p>

<p>Anyway… A wrote an essay on a topic of my choice
and I’m not quite sure it is up to par
would anyone like to read and give me suggestions by december 1st? (when I’m turning in my apps)
I’d like someone to be as critical as possible! I don’t mind criticism at all. </p>

<p>THANKS :)</p>

<p>I’ll do it. If it helps, I’m a sophomore at a magnet school (class of 2011) with a 800CR and a 730 writing. PM me.</p>

<p>i’ll read it.
send me a PM or at my email, <a href=“mailto:tommytran@my.lonestar.edu”>tommytran@my.lonestar.edu</a></p>

<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>I could help. Will PM you my email.</p>