I need a few reviews/opinions on what I can do to improve it

College Essays
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<p>Prefer people not applying to schools in IL or MI just because I don’t want them to be tempted to use the same thing or something for the same school even if they write it in their own words. </p>

<p>Also the application did not specify any specific format they wanted for their essay. Nothing about double or single space. Just word length and topic. See previous topic: <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/625836-what-preferred-format.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/625836-what-preferred-format.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>I’ll read it. PM it over.</p>