I need a native speaker to read my essay

<p>I don’t expect you to correct every single mistake I make, for I realise you don’t have the time to do so. However, it would be great to know if I have some major weaknesses. Also, I’m interested in the impression my essay leaves in a stranger who has to get to know me.</p>

<p>I am a bit skeptical about sharing my essay with other 2014-ers. Help by parents and college students is more than appreciated!</p>

<p>Thank you in advance!</p>

<p>Edit: I’m talking about my Common App essay</p>

<p>I am a 2014-er, but if my word means anything, I promise, on my honor not to distribute or copy it. I would love to help you.</p>

<p>Thank you, tim739, but I would like to show the essay to somebody who has already gone through all this. I hope this doesn’t sound paranoic.</p>

<p>I will take a look. I’m a parent of a 2014. I read/critique quite a few here. PM it to me if you would like me to do so for you.</p>