I need an adult to look over my essay because

<p>I used some allusions to things from when I was young, as an attempt as humor, so I just want to make sure adults won’t feel out of the loop (especially adcoms!)</p>

<p>Iwasjustwonderin, If you are just looking to see if I would “get” the humor, I would be happy to read it. BTW, I don’t have any children applying to college this year.</p>

<p>You could just send it in a PM if you’d like.</p>

<p>THANK YOU! Ive been trying to get readers ALL day. Deadline is at midnight and I needed someone to look it over, so thanks so much. you’re awesome!</p>

<p>Oh, wow, I am surprised that nobody was willing to help out. I have not gotten your PM yet, so I don’t know if you tried sending it. Just thought you should know in case you thought that I got a PM.</p>

<p>Never mind, I just got your PM.</p>

<p>I’ll read it, if you want more thoughts. I don’t have any kids applying this year, either. PM me!</p>

<p>I sent the PM riverrunner, hope you got it! the deadline for most of my schools is tonight, so itd be great if you could get it back to me within the next two hours or so. thanks once again</p>

<p>iwasjustwonderin, I’m stilll up if you are still in need.</p>