<p>If you would like to help suggest changes to my essay, either gramatically or content based (preferably content) I would love your help and I will PM it to you. </p>
<p>I’m kind of in desperate need of readers because only a select number of my personal friends/family can read this essay based on its topic. (hopefully that will all change very soon, I’m working on it!)</p>
<p>I’m applying to Duke, Emory, Michigan, and Boston College, so if you are a high school senior this year and applying to any of those schools I would prefer if you didnt ask for a PM; it’s nothing personal! haha</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I am in high school, but I’m only a junior and probably won’t apply to any of the colleges you listed next year except maybe Emory.</p>
<p>@randomkid1234
Did you get my PM ?? I think I sent but i can’t find it in my sent messages.</p>
<p>@FreedomEagle i got it and i just responded! thanks! anymore readers?</p>
<p>ill read it: 
if u read mine after! pm me afterwards</p>
<p>I thought it was amazing. To be honest, if I was you I would not change a word of it. Stay true to yourself, and keep fighting for what you know in your heart is right. Most of all, don’t let others bring you down. As I now know you’re a religious person, I don’t feel afraid telling you that I’ll pray you get into whichever one of those colleges is your first choice. Good luck in the process! Once again, that was an amazing essay.</p>
<p>sure, I am willing to take a look…pm me</p>
<p>@andrewts585 thank you so much!</p>
<p>any other readers? </p>
<p>PS-if any of you want to send me your essay after you read mine im totally cool with it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it…PM it ova </p>
<p>And I am a high school senior but.I’m applying to Amherst, Williams, Tufts,.Colgate and those are my top choices (Tufts is first choice though) </p>
<p>PM and I will read and.offer hopefully valuable suggestions
Sent from my Desire HD using CC App</p>
<p>Okay I have sent it to all of you and thanks to all who have responded so far. </p>
<p>Since I have already gotten some criticism and thought about it more, anyone who posts after this I won’t send you my essay for probably at least a day because I am going to revise it and then I will either make another thread or bump up this one.</p>
<p>Just PMed my comments to you. Hope they help </p>
<p>Sent from my Desire HD using CC App</p>
<p>I’ll read it…applying as a transfer student and definitely not applying for Duke or U of M.</p>
<p>@DesiCollegegirl Thanks, i think i responded to you.</p>
<p>@Yakov Im going to revise my essay to a more final draft and then ill send it to you later this weekend!</p>
<p>PM it over and i’ll check it out right now!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look and tell you what I think :)</p>
<p>okay I’m just about finished with my newly revised version. any more readers?</p>