I need feedback on my music... (please?)

[Reveriece]

<p>[Secret</a> by AriaRoyce on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free](<a href=“http://■■■■■■■■■■■■■■/ariaroyce/secret]Secret”>SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds)</p>

<p>Here’s a song I made on my keyboard. it’s amateur, and there are some parts where it has to be corrected, but please tell me if you like it or not!</p>

[Federico14]

<p>It’s very good, although I prefer types such as the one “Revolution” you posted. Are you going to pursue a music major possibly?</p>