<p>Hey Im applying for the EOP programs in NY state, and im having a hard time organizing and structurin my essay! Is anyone willing to help me structure my ideas?</p>
<p>well, you can’t lose by going chronologically, especially in this case</p>
<p>what helps me out is writing all my ideas down in circles, then connecting them with lines as it’s appropriate. it kind of helps you get an idea of what things flow together so if you choose to write an outline it will go smoother.</p>
<p>yeah thats a great idea!!! right now i have my Intro and Conclusion finalize for now …its the body paragraphs where i discuss my neighborhood,reasons why i didnt get good grades freshmen year, and discussing me in general its hard to connect it al together in such a way that it make sense…</p>
<p>Also i need soem feedback on my Essay as it stands for now!!! Can anyone Help out??</p>