I need help picking between these two essays...

<p>Hey guys. I've probably been really annoying on here, and I promise it will stop soon, but will anyone be willing to read my USC transfer essay? I wrote two and I know for sure I will use one of them. I cut one down to 500 words; the other is 730ish. I need to know which is better.</p>

<p>I am a parent you can PM me. I have a senior son who is done with his apps.</p>

<p>I'm interested. PM me, please. Don't worry: I already got accepted ED (UPenn), so I won't steal your lovely essays :p.</p>

<p>I could help you out :)</p>

I can look over them. Would love to help :)</p>

<p>I can check them out! Pm me :)</p>

<p>I can take a look at it and help you out :)</p>