I need help summarizing my extracurricular activities

Applying to College
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Hello Guys can someone help me to customize my Extracurriculars activities description, i really need help, so i want it to be really impactful , because i am applying to t-70 schools and i want to really get into one , btw CS major

  1. Activity
    Founder and president of the programming club

Initiated and led a club; teaching python; hosting python contests; cybersecurity workshops. Grew club membership to 10+ students
9,10,11
5 hours p/w 18 weeks p/y
during school year

2.Activity
Charity Soccer Match Organizer
Organised 3 charity soccer matches; donated 1000+ AZN;Attracted 100+ attendees per event; match was held for a child who has cancer;
10 th grade, 7 hours p/w 3 weeks p/y

3.Activity
Team captain and founder

led the team in a tournament against 10+ other teams; Organized and conducted weekly training sessions; fostering team skills and sportsmanship.
9,10, All year 8 hours p/w 20 weeks p/y

4.Model UN Senior

Conducted training sessions about Model UN for younger students; Taught to 5+ students; organized weekly practice sessions to develop diplomatic skills and global awareness.

during school year 10th grade 3 hours p/w , 10 weeks p/y

Participated in Physics Science Fair; collaborated with my friend to construct a rocket exploring pressure and volume; achieved 4th place
6.
Internship
Backend Developer
Gamma Corporation

Debugged Gamma corporations website; suggested enhancements websites logic; maintained websites database; collaborate with a front-end team

Volunteer beach cleaning
Volunteered to clean plastic & other garbage on the 2 different coastlines on the Caspian Sea; learned group dynamic skills

Passion project
Created an AI chatbot for our local community to battle depression; conducted 3+ info session about raising awareness to depression

Career oriented
Student
STEP IT Academy

Learned how to code in 5+ programming languages;Learned web-designing skills; Assistant of teacher;Learned 3D designing skills

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Are you currently completing your last year in high school? If not, what year are you in.

Your other posts imply that you are currently finishing high school.

And very important detail for those responding…you are an international student.

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For item 3 you should say what type of team it is.

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Since i am from Azerbaijan we have 11 grades in total there

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yeah

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i wrote in common app its Soccer , but how is description overall

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Btw i am international applicant from Azerbaijan

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its my graduating year , so thumper1 can you pls review my descriptions for my Extracurricular activities, i would be really grateful

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First- commendable list!! Just at a quick glance you need to find another word for “organized” as you have used it multiple times and you need to describe an “impact” your activity had. For example - an example of the impact your beach clean up had. Clears 200lbs of plastic? Resulted in reopening of beach……etc. hope this helps! And I’m not being critical- you have a nice variety and did overall a nice job. Just trying to help for past experience :slight_smile:

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thank you

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@SOBACHKA12S feel free to DM me your EA list - I will help to review.

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