<p>i am applying to University of Michigan AnnArbor. i just got done with one of my short answers, and the topic is:
At the University of Michigan, we are committed to building a superb educational community with students of diverse talents, experiences, opinions and cultural backgrounds. What would you as an individual bring to our campus community? </p>
<p>i need someone to just comment me on it. please post your email id and i will mail the short-answer to you.</p>