<p>This level of responsibility is simply unavailable for an unproven man as myself in the competitive job market.</p>
<p>is it “myself” or “me”?</p>
<p>and yes i skipped the day when my 3rd grade teacher taught us the rule</p>
<p>“an unproven man such as myself” ??</p>
<p>yea thata wut i thought but my word processor keeps saying it’s “me”…</p>
<p>Personally, I would say “… simply unavailable for a man as unproven as myself”</p>
<p>let us know how it goes trying to submit it this late… servers going to be soooo slow</p>
<p>to add to the correction, what about replacing “as” with “like”? Sounds better imo, but I don’t know the full context of the topic.</p>
<p>No offense, but a person who waits until the last day to write their personal statement shouldn’t be talking about responsibility.</p>
<p>^^u mean a person who deals with over $1.5 million in monetary funds for his school and has a 4.0 while taking 24 units (9 honor units) this semester knows nothing about responsibility? sweet!</p>
<p>Why would anyone entrust $1.5 million to a kid that doesn’t even have a bachelor’s degree?</p>
<p>^that is EXACTLY the point</p>
<p>I’m not sure why our society has decided that having a bachelor’s degree means being responsible/a real adult/ready for employment, etc. Anyone can get a bachelor’s degree with enough time, but to demonstrate responsibility and maturity is another thing all together.</p>
<p>Bill Gates did not hold a bachelor’s degree until just a few years ago.</p>
<p>I like that the title of this thread is, “I need quick ‘grammer’ help please!” LMAO</p>
<p>To be fair, that’s more of a spelling situation :).</p>
<p>Let’s be friends AMorrison. ^,^</p>