The prompt: “Please choose one of the commitments that you listed in the
Activities section (activity, interest, or work experience)
and provide a short description of its importance to you.
Include why that commitment could be relevant to your student
experience at Penn State.”
While my peers were hooked to cartoons, I became interested in computer technology and designing websites when I was eleven years old. Instead of flashy graphics and poor user navigation implemented by other designers, I choose to balance the use of a website against the design. I believe that aesthetic quality is second to effective user function. Pursuing a career in Management Information Systems will allow me to apply my methodology, improving end-user functions, to real-world business applications.
<h2>When friends and teachers approached me with computer problems, I was always able to provide assistance. I want to be a leader in the information revolution, and to be able to apply my methods to improve the sectors of businesses worldwide. Therefore, I want to be a part of this by broadening my capabilities and skills that Penn State can offer me, through its influential information technology-related courses. Plato said it best when he stated, The direction in which education starts a man will determine his future, and accordingly, I see a bright opportunity in pursuing a career at Penn State. Being one of the proud students to say We Are Penn State will be a stepping-stone towards success in my life.</h2>
Critique me to the nth degree-- Be nasty. If possible, please offer me any suggestions as well.