I poured a lot into this essay - now I need someone to destroy it!

College Essays
1

<p>Yeah, it’s the same essay as in the other post, but I’ve significantly altered it and need some serious critique.</p>

2

<p>Your name + title :)</p>

3

<p>Huh? 10 char</p>

4

<p>Just pour the scalding hot soup…</p>

5

<p>rofl, didn’t see that coming. Seriously though, anyone interested in reading it? Please?</p>

6

<p>yes. pm me.</p>

7

<p>I’ll read it.
Pm.</p>

8

<p>Feel free to PM it.</p>

9

<p>Feel free to send it over :D</p>

10

<p>I LOVE destroying essays!! I’ll read it!</p>

11

<p>I’ll read your scalding hot essay.</p>