<p>I still don’t like this paper, and I don’t know why. I feel like it’s too vague, jumpy, and long. Anyone want to take a look?</p>
<p>I don’t have very many posts. But do you mind if I have a look?</p>
<p>Couldn’t hurt, I guess…</p>
<p>you can pm it to me if you’d like</p>
<p>i’ll be happy to take a look - just PM it to me.</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like</p>
<p>Pm me if you would like.</p>
<p>Thanks, guys</p>
<p>PS, there is mild concern over the introduction.</p>
<p>just edited it, new version.</p>
<p>pm it over</p>