<p>It’s about starting a charity and going to Africa. My essay needs to be PERFECT. Anyone willing to help? I made a thread a week or two ago, but this version has been rewritten a bit. Thanks.</p>
<p>Sure PM me.</p>
<p>I can look it over as well.</p>
<p>Let’s have it. PM me.</p>
<p>Curious to read this one.</p>
<p>So far one negative and one positive response.</p>
<p>send it to me</p>
<p>fixed again! i actually got a working title now.</p>
<p>revised even further to emphasize that this isn’t a clich</p>
<p>I could take a look if you’d like</p>
<p>sure I would love to read it</p>
<p>anyone not in high school?</p>
<p>I read it in a previous form, can i see how you changed it?</p>
<p>yes, thanks a lot.</p>
<p>I can read it and give you my honest opinion on it.
Let me just stress the fact, that I am applying to college this year as well, but I’ve already written all my essays and only need to submit an art supplement.</p>
<p>Also, I can’t fix your grammar (:
(also, I hope you didn’t send your essay to everyone who’s posted and also, I think you should let silvertrtle & Euroazn read it, they both seem to be highly respected essay readers/fixers here, plus you can be sure they’re both quite reliable)</p>
<p>Yeah, I’m not sending it to just anybody, and I sent it to Euroazn, but he didn’t give me feedback yet.</p>
<p>I’d love to read it! I am a 2015 applicant, but I have already written my essays.</p>