<p>How do you go about answering paragraph correction q's like these ones? </p>
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<li>ORIGINAL: (revise sentence) Branson is a tourist town, like ski towns and beach resorts, it is visited by hundreds of thousands of people every year during the months when its shows are in season.</li>
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<p>Now, I narrowed down to 2 choices:
A) Branson is a tourist town, like those near ski or beach resorts: each year, hundreds of thousands of travelers visit during the months when its shows are in season.</p>
<p>E) Branson is a tourist town: hundreds of thousands of travelers like those who visit ski or beach resorts visit Branson during the months each year when its shows are in season.</p>
<p>How do you go about choosing the correct answer?</p>
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<li>ORIGINAL: (combine the 2 sentences)
There are many recreations and natural attractions in this area, like golf courses, lakes, rivers, caverns, and mountains. People really don't know what the place has to offer. </li>
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<p>B) People unfamiliar with Branson might not realize that this area offers a range of recreational activities and natural attractions, including golf courses, lakes, rivers, caverns, and mountains.</p>
<p>D) People unfamiliar with Branson do not know that golf courses, lakes, rivers, caverns, and mountains can all be found in the Branson area if they were to visit.</p>
<p>Answer explanations I have are garbage and useless. </p>
<p>Also, what can I do to improve this portion of W? I am really bad at paragraph correction....I usually make 1 or 2 mistakes in everything else in W but paragraph correction destroys any hope of 770+.</p>