I want opinions on my essays/ I'm an Afghan applicant


I would appreciate if someone can help me by reading my essays and giving me feedback.
I plan to apply RD to the following schools.

Lafayette, Vassar, Colgate, Williams
Skidmore, Lake Forest, St. Lawrence , Middlebury
Princeton, Stanford, Amherst, Yale

I am from a peasant background and I don’t have much resources available to me besides an old laptop and an unstable internet connection. I know that I don’t have much chances of getting in, but I’d like to do my best in finishing up my application.