<p>I will proofread/critique (grammar and style) the essay(s) of anyone who posts in this thread. In return, you will agree to let me use the essay as an example of my proofreading ability when bidding for jobs on a freelancing board. The essay(s) will not be posted in public at any time; they will be sent in private messages to job posters, who I’m sure have absolutely no interest in plagiarizing your essay.</p>
<p>So, if that sounds fair to you, please PM me your essay(s) and post in this thread.</p>
<p>Please critique my 250 words supplement essay</p>
<p>I love bananas, my name is Yelena and I love bananas because they are yellow. I enjoy eating banana pie and my goal is to cook as much as banana pie that I can when I attend the University of Alobama in Illinois. Did you know that I am the best student in my class? I have been having As all my life and my 3rd grade teacher said that I should go to agricultural school because I love banana too much.In Alabama they have big farm so I will have a chance to eat as much banana as I want because I love banana. I look forward to come to the University of Alobama.</p>
<p>By the way I am transferring from the University of Texas In Bushington</p>