<p>hey everyone can you give me your insights on my thesis state to see if its English 3 Ap material please!!!</p>
<p>In “Priceless” by Alice W. there is controversy over the significance of old quilts, that have been passed down for generations,if whether they’re valued " price less" or as hold hand-me- downs.</p>
<p>thanks ! if you think you have tips to make it better feel free to go ahead =)</p>
<p>why did you post this in 2 places?</p>
<p>Sounds like a long run-on sentence.</p>
<p>Your statement is somewhat awkward, but then again in my class we are constantly excoriated for using even one more word than is necessary, lol. Anyway, I think this statement would flow better as follows: In Alice W’s “Priceless,” conflicting interpretations of the meaning of value present themselves in an anecdote recounting the wide range of values assigned to antiquated quilts.</p>
<p>So the story isn’t called Everyday Use?</p>
<p>Poor grammar and typos. Fix those things first. Full names are also standard for the first mention of an author.</p>
<p>Even then, it’s still very vague. “There is controversy” is a bad statement to have in a thesis, or anywhere in a paper, most likely, because it doesn’t really say anything. Of course there’s controversy – why else would you be talking about it? Rather, what is the controversy and why? I can’t even understand what you mean in the second half of the sentence. Why is there a conflict between something being considered priceless and being considered a hand-me-down? Can’t they go together?</p>