IFFY ABOUT MY CA ESSAY: need advice, commnts, anything please!

<p>i'm NOT feeling confident about my common app essay.</p>

<p>i am a huge procrastinator and i ended up writing it on new year's day... i already submitted the common app to 2 schools. i need to submit cornell, boston u, villanova u, george washington u, northeastern u, and u mich this week.</p>

<p>please if anyone is willing to look it over, i will PM you. any help will be appreciated!</p>

<p>I’ll take a quick look at it. I just finished applying to schools like 30 min. ago :)</p>

<p>I’ll look at it as well; I’m done applying and SUPER BORED, haha.
Just PM it to me!</p>

<p>I’ll look at it as well; I’m done applying and SUPER BORED, haha.
Just PM it to me!</p>

<p>I’ll look, PM me! :]</p>