<p>To the first response I guess. I obviously don’t have time to critique a hundred people. I just finished my essay. It is rather heavy, and I’m hoping to capture a candid quality. It is presented in the form of a letter to my late father. I would like someone to proof read and fill me in on the overall response that it brings out of a person that doesn’t know me or my story. PM me your essay and I’ll send you mine. Happy New Year!</p>
<p>Well, I’ve already submitted everything but I’d be happy to read yours. PM me if you’d like.</p>
<p>Send me. I’ll read and critique your essay.</p>
<p>ill read and critique urs if u want</p>