I'm a new member, could anyone look over my essay?

<p>My college has a few prompts, and I chose “risk that you’ve taken.” I’m working under the Commonapp 500 word limit. I’m at 497 words right now, and I’ve just finished my draft. I wrote about an unfortunate experience in my personal life. I know it’s short notice, but could anybody look this over? I’ll PM what I have to anyone who wants to help me. Deadline is tonight. =d</p>

<p>I don’t know if I’m posting this in the right place, so sorry if I’m not. I’m new to posting on this site.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll look. PM me.</p>

<p>I will take a look. Pm it over :)</p>