<p>I’m not going to spend too much time going over each essay, and frankly, I have a philosophy that you shouldn’t put all your trust in people over the internet… so I’m here to give my opinion, fix grammar/mechanics/etc, and basically state where I think the essay is at. As I mentioned before, I discourage people from sending me their essays thinking that I’ll have all the solutions and answers for the best essay they could possibly write - false. I’m just an honest person with a fair opinion and a knack for writing, and that can never hurt. But I must defer you to the experts - college counselors, AP English teachers, tutors, parents, and maybe even private college counselor. Send me a PM with the essay attached, and then provide an email address that you feel comfortable sending to me. This is so I can send you Microsoft Word Track Changes, which is a lot more helpful than saying “You should remove the comma at x line.” Good luck this year, and I’m giving you the option to have a different viewpoint on an essay that could determine your future.</p>
<p>You don’t have to necessarily reply… some of you have only sent me a PM, which is fine! Just a heads up.
And also… it’d be helpful if you mentioned what essay question you are writing for. Sometimes it can be unclear.</p>