im desperate (no housewife, just an essay)

i was wondering if i could get some feed back on my Common App essay but i really dont want to post it online, is there anyone (preferably a non-student, who could read it and tell me what they think, ive had a couple people revise it already and give me some advice, but im not sure if the advice made too much sense) whom i could e-mail my essay privately and recieve some feedback on it? thank you.

<p>anyone? i need some outside input on it…</p>

<p>mm, well, i’m a student (if it makes you feel more secure, i’ve finished my common app for rice interim already), and i can read if you like: <a href="mailto:roseskies@hotmail.com">roseskies@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>thanks yz16</p>