<p>I’m writing my PS as i’m taking this short break. would anybody be willing to read and possibly critique it because I really want a solid statement to send in.</p>
<p>I can email it to you and you can give me some feedback. That would be greatly APPRECIATED.</p>
<p>I’m happy to look it over for you and give you feed back an suggestions</p>
<p>I’ve had a few people read my paper and gave some suggestions. Thanks to those who did. Can a couple more people take a look so I can see what everyone suggests and so i can revise? </p>
<p>Appreciate it.</p>
<p>Sure, I could do that.</p>
<p>Feel free to send me a message =)</p>