I'm starting to write my essay about my personal growth since the passing of my father but I am not sure how to go about it without it seeming too "sad"

I am sorry for your loss. That is really hard.

Remember that the essay is a chance for the AO to see who you are as a person and to think “This would be a great person to have in our community!” So yes, you are right in wanting to make sure your essay isn’t “sad”.

Focusing your essay on something you did/learned from your dad and how you carry that in your life is a great way to show your resilience and what matters to you.

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