IMMEDIATE READER NEEDED! Common app essay (Challenged belief or idea)

College Essays
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<p>Need someone to read it and offer some critique, not necessarily editing/proofreading unless you see something.</p>

<p>Just offer some comments and tell me what you think.</p>

<p>I will message it to you just reply to this or message me.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I would be happy to look it over, I also have to submit supplements today for NYU so mabe we can do an exchange.</p>

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<p>@tuokeke just messaged you</p>